방문을 환영합니다.
한국어
조회 수 573 추천 수 0 댓글 0
?

단축키

Prev이전 문서

Next다음 문서

크게 작게 위로 아래로 댓글로 가기 인쇄
?

단축키

Prev이전 문서

Next다음 문서

크게 작게 위로 아래로 댓글로 가기 인쇄

IELTS Writing Task 2: Sample writing #7

(주제 : 아이엘츠 라이팅 테스크 2 : #7)

 

작성자 : BIG JANE(맘잉글리쉬 mom-eng.com)

참조 : ielts-simon.com

 

 

We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

 

 Some people believe that we should not help people in other countries as long as there are problems in our own society. I disagree with this view because I believe that we should try to help as many people as possible.

 

 On the one hand, I accept that it is important to help our neighbours and fellow citizens. In most communities there are people who are impoverished or disadvantaged in some way. It is possible to find homeless people, for example, in even the wealthiest of cities, and for those who are concerned about this problem, there are usually opportunities to volunteer time or give money to support these people. In the UK, people can help in a variety of ways, from donating clothing to serving free food in a soup kitchen. As the problems are on our doorstep, and there are obvious ways to help, I can understand why some people feel that we should prioritise local charity.

 

 At the same time, I believe that we have an obligation to help those who live beyond our national borders. In some countries the problems that people face are much more serious than those in our own communities, and it is often even easier to help. For example, when children are dying from curable diseases in African countries, governments and individuals in richer countries can save lives simply by paying for vaccines that already exist. A small donation to an international charity might have a much greater impact than helping in our local area.

 

 In conclusion, it is true that we cannot help everyone, but in my opinion national boundaries should not stop us from helping those who are in need.

?
0%
0%

List of Articles
번호 제목 글쓴이 날짜 조회 수
화제의 글 아이엘츠 라이팅 9.0 샘플 #36 주제 : genetic engineering (유전공학) / Discussion type 맘잉글리쉬 2019.11.12 1275
화제의 글 아이엘츠 라이팅 9.0 샘플 #35 주제 : Small families (핵가족들) 2 맘잉글리쉬 2019.08.25 2080
14 아이엘츠 라이팅 테스크 2 : #14 discuss both views 맘잉글리쉬 2018.11.11 816
13 아이엘츠 라이팅 테스크 2 : #13 problem/solution essay 맘잉글리쉬 2018.11.11 720
12 아이엘츠 라이팅 테스크 2 : #12 video games 맘잉글리쉬 2018.11.11 631
11 아이엘츠 라이팅 테스크 2 : #11 Why do we need music 맘잉글리쉬 2018.11.11 582
10 아이엘츠 라이팅 테스크 2 : #10 to do unpaid work in their free time 맘잉글리쉬 2018.11.11 491
9 아이엘츠 라이팅 테스크 2 : #9 hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable 1 맘잉글리쉬 2018.11.11 466
8 아이엘츠 라이팅 테스크 2 : #8 technology affected the types of relationships 맘잉글리쉬 2018.11.11 588
» 아이엘츠 라이팅 테스크 2 : #7 everyone in the world that needs help 맘잉글리쉬 2018.11.11 573
6 아이엘츠 라이팅 테스크 2 : #6 between equality and personal achievement 맘잉글리쉬 2018.11.11 536
5 아이엘츠 라이팅 테스크 2 : #5 equal numbers of male and female students 맘잉글리쉬 2018.11.11 516
4 아이엘츠 라이팅 테스크 2 : #4 museums should be 맘잉글리쉬 2018.11.11 588
3 아이엘츠 라이팅 테스크 2 : #3 studying at university or college 맘잉글리쉬 2018.11.11 862
2 아이엘츠 라이팅 테스크 2 : #2 danger of extinction 맘잉글리쉬 2018.11.11 848
1 아이엘츠 라이팅 테스크 2 : #1 environment 맘잉글리쉬 2018.11.11 1767
Board Pagination Prev 1 2 Next
/ 2